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The first text that I'm gonna post is named "The Murderer of Minds", written by me and my classmate Jorge Salomão. It will be published in parts.
This text is a terror story.
This is the story of the killer of minds. His name was Jack, he had a troubled look and his body had a constant and strange need for the ideas of others. He had a magical device that could encapsulate the knowledge of people who appeared to have different thoughts. Lonely Jack lived in a strange street where no one lives. His dirty hair and stinky mouth combined with his terrible look provided an aura of essential ritual in the dark that allowed him to choose his victims.
Jack was the son of an unknown death metal musician called Jimi Killer, murdered by his fans that idolized him like a devil in a macabre ritual near to Machu Picchu. After this trauma, Jack believed that by imprisoning the minds of other people in his magical device he could become immortal.
Jack’s father was unknown by most people, but with faithful followers who accompanied his work. Some people say that Jimi Killer murdered his wife in front of Jack when he was only 1 year old. Another version says that she died in an accidental fall from ladder. Maybe that’s why Jack was never a normal boy in his childhood.
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In one day, before going to school, Jack was saying goodbye to his father. Upon entering the room of him, Jack realized the rubber forearm swelled of his father. While Jack watched this scene, his father applied heroin in himself.
Jack suffered desperately to see that image of his father, who was already visibly crazy. Suddenly Jimi Killer says:
-I have become comfortably numb.
After saying that Jimi angrily threw the syringe in Jack, injuring him painfully, his body and his soul. Even so Jack went to school.
Jack always ate his lunch alone, because he was already accustomed to the loneliness, due to several shows that his father did around the country.
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By Viviane de Col
Yesterday I did many things, I went to school, talked with my friends, surfed on Internet and watched TV.
At night, I watched soap operas on TV and studied for exams. After it, I went to bed.
So, this was my yesterday day.
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By Esopo
A shepherd’s boy was tending his flock near a village, and thought it would be great fun to hoax the villagers by pretending that a Wolf was attacking the sheep: so he shouted out, “Wolf! Wolf!” and when the people came running up, he laughed at them for their pains.
He did this more than once, and every time the villagers found they had been hoaxed, for there was no Wolf at all.
At last a Wolf really did come, and the boy cried, “Wolf! Wolf!” as loud as he could, but the people were so used to hearing him call that they took no notice of his cries for help. And so the Wolf had it all his own way, and killed off sheep after sheep at this pleasure.
Moral: You cannot believe a liar even when he tells the truth.
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By Mariana Martelli
Yesterday was a day much lawful, I did many things. Early in the morning, I went to my friend’s house and had breakfast there. After it, I went to my own house. In my house I watched TV and movies, and played a bit on computer.
At night I had dinner, and read a book. After it, I went to sleep and dreamed with the angels.
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Once he was startled when an older boy stole his pizza at school. Jack already troubled by what he had witnessed at home, he was filled with a rage that he had never taken, his red eyes filled with tears, his trembling body was taken with a fierce hatred, a strong force blinded Jack. The Jack's face evil finally appeared. Jack pulled off the nose of the boy with a bite. Thereafter he was known by the nickname “anteater killer”.
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By Aesop
The fox and the stork kept good relations, and the friendship seemed to be sincere. One day the fox invited the stork to dinner and, for fun, put on the table just a shallow dish containing a little soup. For her it was all very easy, but the Stork could only wet the tip of the bill and walked away hungry.
-Sorry, said the fox, it seems you did not like the soup.
-Do not think about it, replied the stork. I hope that in return for this visit, you will soon have dinner with me.
The next day, Fox was paying a visit. When seated at the table, which had for dinner was contained in a jar tall, long neck and narrow mouth, where the fox could not enter the nose. All she did was lick the outside of the jar.
-Do not apologize for the dinner, said the stork, so you feel in your own stomach what I felt yesterday.
Moral of the story - Who hurts with iron, with iron will be hurt.
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The boy who took his pizza never thought Jack had thought that the moment, like the death of his mother, his father lost in a world of drugs and alcohol, the constant attacks that he suffered at school. All these thoughts of Jack influed him to live in a world of sadness, rage and disillusionment with everything and everyone.
After this episode in school, Jimi invited Jack to watch a show of his band in Machu Picchu, this invitation of Jimi showed up as a way to apologize to Jack.During the first show of Mind Killer in Machu Picchu, with only thirteen years of age, he met an old shaman indian who offered him a tea from a cactus called San Pietro. After a crazy psychedelic trip he discovered the secrets of the mind and woke up leaning on the magical device.
When he returned to New York City his hometown, few years after the death of his father, Jack wanted to take revenge on the system that imprisoned the mind of people, making them believe what they wanted. Jack wanted to create his own system.Then, Jack began his plan he put on his ripped pants and his Airburn jacket, and thus inspired by the death of his father, he began to hunt the minds with the best ideas.
More than 500 minds were imprisoned by Jack's magical device. While he imprisioned the minds, he heard someone whispering in his ear:
- Go Jack, Go Jack. You can not stop. Keep your plan.
The people whose minds were abducted became system zombies. He acted for three years until the police killed him in an ambush. It is believed that his magical device mysteriously turned back to Machu Picchu. Even today, death metal lovers, seeking power and the control of system, try to find the Magical Device pyramids hidden in the underground of Machu Picchu.
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Sandra Rosa is very beautiful, young and successful. She's a famous actress. She's also very rich. Her house near the beach is big and beautiful, and her car is very expensive. Her fans love her. But is she happy?
Sandra says, "yeah, I'm young, rich, beautiful, and famous. People think rich people are happy.
That's noy always true!"
Sandra's brother, Mike, is her manager. He says, "Sandra is only 18. She enjoys acting and entertaining people. But she's not happy. She doesn't like being famous."
"It's true," Sandra says. "I'm never alone. Reporters are everywhere. Wherever I go, they're there. They're outside my house all the time!"
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You're very creative. I hope you continue to write. Do not make the same mistakes I've been making. Write WHATEVER comes to you, laugh during the process and reflect on it if it keeps you awake at night.
ResponderExcluirAll the best.
Thank you Leandro.
ResponderExcluirAll the best for you too.